for Spiral Huntsman5/2 c11 Samuel Santillan
no te preocupes esperarehasta el proximo capitulo , estuvo bueno y e interesante
no te preocupes esperarehasta el proximo capitulo , estuvo bueno y e interesante
4/17 c11 Xud10a
This story is terrible. There is no difference what so over between this crossover and actual Cannon RWBY. If you’re going to make a crossover but not change anything to cannon then don’t write a story
This story is terrible. There is no difference what so over between this crossover and actual Cannon RWBY. If you’re going to make a crossover but not change anything to cannon then don’t write a story
4/11 c5 YuukiAsuna-Chan
Why even bother with this? All this forced meetings, why not just have them, oh maybe meet at fucking school instead of this.
also, this is just straight up canon, Naruto makes no difference to events.
Why even bother with this? All this forced meetings, why not just have them, oh maybe meet at fucking school instead of this.
also, this is just straight up canon, Naruto makes no difference to events.
4/11 c2 YuukiAsuna-Chan
Why would they hire someone who isn't even an Academy student? That literally makes no sense. This is just forced garbage to get him to meet Blake.
Why would they hire someone who isn't even an Academy student? That literally makes no sense. This is just forced garbage to get him to meet Blake.
4/8 c11 Guest
Damn you literally writing canon with Naruto injected here and there.
Like the Bookstore scene. You didn't do anything with it. No outsider looking in. No subtle clue on what may be different. Was literally Rwby canon.
As an actual Rwby fan, this crossover kind of boring.
Perhaps someone whom never heard of Rwby, but enjoys Naruto may appreciate it.
Good luck.
Damn you literally writing canon with Naruto injected here and there.
Like the Bookstore scene. You didn't do anything with it. No outsider looking in. No subtle clue on what may be different. Was literally Rwby canon.
As an actual Rwby fan, this crossover kind of boring.
Perhaps someone whom never heard of Rwby, but enjoys Naruto may appreciate it.
Good luck.
4/8 c11 Guest2
YES!
YES!
154/8 c3 Rezuvious
I'm surprised no one pointed out this mistake at all. You have him meet Blake 3 weeks before Beacon starts, see the flyer for the Mistral tournament, he decides to go and now that he is at Mistral it's suddenly 2 months before Beacon starts.
I'm surprised no one pointed out this mistake at all. You have him meet Blake 3 weeks before Beacon starts, see the flyer for the Mistral tournament, he decides to go and now that he is at Mistral it's suddenly 2 months before Beacon starts.
3/14 c10 LordSoundwave
Great chapter, though I'm really interested in what is Naruto's semblance.
Please update
Great chapter, though I'm really interested in what is Naruto's semblance.
Please update
