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Lush. I adore Bryan and Ray :3
Lush. I adore Bryan and Ray :3
7/24/2007 c1 
15Neena14
LOL. No seriously, I feel like laughing out loud.
SO this fiction is of almost four years ago. I see. It's very apparent, if you don't mind me stating.
Hmm, There's not even a full lemon. Things are a bit rushed up and there are spelling and grammatical mistakes. But no big. Seeing that your present standards have blasted me off to jupiter (No, I can't go to mars and face you. Heh) I'm not complaining.
15Neena14LOL. No seriously, I feel like laughing out loud.
SO this fiction is of almost four years ago. I see. It's very apparent, if you don't mind me stating.
Hmm, There's not even a full lemon. Things are a bit rushed up and there are spelling and grammatical mistakes. But no big. Seeing that your present standards have blasted me off to jupiter (No, I can't go to mars and face you. Heh) I'm not complaining.
8/24/2006 c1 The neko jin
._. thats just BEGGING for a sequel! whit a lemon.. lemon? lemon for us pervs out here? n_n
make more its so good
Neko
._. thats just BEGGING for a sequel! whit a lemon.. lemon? lemon for us pervs out here? n_n
make more its so good
Neko
10/18/2005 c1 loveyaray.00
Bravo! Vonderful! Yay U! This was awsome! Aw how cute, love the ending! ^-^
Bravo! Vonderful! Yay U! This was awsome! Aw how cute, love the ending! ^-^
8/4/2005 c1 Nessie
Please write a second chapter! Just one more chapter with a lemon! Just for me, please?
Please write a second chapter! Just one more chapter with a lemon! Just for me, please?
7/5/2005 c1 AloneAtLast
I some how came upon your profile and saw the recomendation of this story. I read it. And it was amazing. I really did think that Brian was going to shoot Rei. You did an excelent job. Congrats.
I some how came upon your profile and saw the recomendation of this story. I read it. And it was amazing. I really did think that Brian was going to shoot Rei. You did an excelent job. Congrats.
8/15/2004 c1 TrigadonPowrpuffchik
This story is GREAT! Pwease continue! We'll Be Hear!
This story is GREAT! Pwease continue! We'll Be Hear!
8/15/2004 c1 TrigadonPowrpuffchik
This story is GREAT! Pwease continue! We'll Be Hear!
This story is GREAT! Pwease continue! We'll Be Hear!
5/28/2004 c1 Ruselyn
WOW THat was great! I really liked it! if there's nosequel to it , then i think you should continue this story and make a new chapter. I'd like to see some fluff and more action between the two bladers.
WOW THat was great! I really liked it! if there's nosequel to it , then i think you should continue this story and make a new chapter. I'd like to see some fluff and more action between the two bladers.
3/9/2004 c1 Platinum Rei
hm...what a weird fic. but i liked it alot. i think that's a more realistic approach 2 the world champs. luvd it ^_~ ~*Rei*~
hm...what a weird fic. but i liked it alot. i think that's a more realistic approach 2 the world champs. luvd it ^_~ ~*Rei*~
12/23/2003 c1 podikegi
Wikid Koolios story dude, you gotta write more chappies, I LOVE this story, I keep checking back but there's never any new chapters.
~NeoPetS4ever~
Wikid Koolios story dude, you gotta write more chappies, I LOVE this story, I keep checking back but there's never any new chapters.
~NeoPetS4ever~
12/15/2003 c1 Cat in the web
WOW! This story is great! I love your fanfic!
Please continue! I want to read more!
WOW! This story is great! I love your fanfic!
Please continue! I want to read more!
