for The Grinning Goblins8h c16 Phoenix
Soo good thanks for this story it is highly enjoyable.
Soo good thanks for this story it is highly enjoyable.
6/3 c8 Guest
The Grangers don’t have a problem sending their daughter to a mixed boarding school for a year but they’re against Harry staying with them for the holidays, where they can monitor the kids... it doesn’t make much sense...
The Grangers don’t have a problem sending their daughter to a mixed boarding school for a year but they’re against Harry staying with them for the holidays, where they can monitor the kids... it doesn’t make much sense...
286/1 c16 Fast Frank
Other than a few edits needed, good chapter.
Overall, good and quite imaginative story.
Other than a few edits needed, good chapter.
Overall, good and quite imaginative story.
6/3 c16 peggy77
Aww, what a sweet story! I did wonder a bit about the other horcruxes but just suspended belief and pretended that they, too, had somehow been destroyed.
Aww, what a sweet story! I did wonder a bit about the other horcruxes but just suspended belief and pretended that they, too, had somehow been destroyed.
6/3 c12 peggy77
When I started this chapter, I suddenly thought of Sirius and thought, "Oh no! Is he just going to continue rotting away in Azkaban since you've changed the story so much?". Then you fixed it, YAY! Thank you!
When I started this chapter, I suddenly thought of Sirius and thought, "Oh no! Is he just going to continue rotting away in Azkaban since you've changed the story so much?". Then you fixed it, YAY! Thank you!
6/3 c10 peggy77
Patrick and Patrice? Lol! Cute!
Btw, it should say, she groused, not she grossed.
Groused basically means complained.
Great story so far, it's a fun, positive story. Nice for a change. :)
Patrick and Patrice? Lol! Cute!
Btw, it should say, she groused, not she grossed.
Groused basically means complained.
Great story so far, it's a fun, positive story. Nice for a change. :)
