4/13/2016 c1 3Yule Horse
It was really good although there were some small mistakes or parts which didn't quite make sense like
'behind the team unnoticed which ended with his voice' or 'Leo apologized sudden'. Also Perry is the head of security not just the night guard. I'm not completely sure about this but I think scarlet is spelt with one T not two.
-YH

6/3/2015 c1 3To Forgive Is Divine
ARRGGH IT'S SO HARD TO READ GODDA**IT