for Smoke and Mirrors9/11/2014 c1 trequor
Pretty good start and I agree that Delsin's speech could use a little shining, but all in all a good fic
Pretty good start and I agree that Delsin's speech could use a little shining, but all in all a good fic
8/5/2014 c1 
2BongoDumbs
Definitely my favorite Infamous fanfiction now. I enjoyed this so much! You captured all the characters perfectly (and I do mean PERFECTLY) and realistically. I could see this whole thing playing out so clearly. Delsin and Fetch especially felt so genuine and sincere in this chapter. Also loved Eugene's interaction with the President; it was super cute!
Your writing is infused with such subtlety and thoughtfulness without being overcomplicated or in-your-face at all, which is a remarkable feat to accomplish. It's awesome to come across such a maturely handled and well written fanfic, and it really is a breath of fresh air for me, especially being that it was completely character driven.
This shit deserves a standing ovation!
Can't wait for your next update, man.
2BongoDumbsDefinitely my favorite Infamous fanfiction now. I enjoyed this so much! You captured all the characters perfectly (and I do mean PERFECTLY) and realistically. I could see this whole thing playing out so clearly. Delsin and Fetch especially felt so genuine and sincere in this chapter. Also loved Eugene's interaction with the President; it was super cute!
Your writing is infused with such subtlety and thoughtfulness without being overcomplicated or in-your-face at all, which is a remarkable feat to accomplish. It's awesome to come across such a maturely handled and well written fanfic, and it really is a breath of fresh air for me, especially being that it was completely character driven.
This shit deserves a standing ovation!
Can't wait for your next update, man.
7/4/2014 c1 Mr. Brown
Great chapter. I am happy that Delsin, Fetch, and Eugene got to meet the president. I also like how short yet memorable the speech was that Delsin gave. It was a good speech, don't beat yourself over it too much. I can't wait to see how Delsin's and Fetch's relationship evolve in the next chapter. Also, if you wanted to surprise us, have Eugene somehow find himself a date. Wouldn't that be interesting. I know he is nervous and all but I am sure you can create a situation or two to make it happen. Once again, thank you for writing this. I can' wait to see what happens next.
Great chapter. I am happy that Delsin, Fetch, and Eugene got to meet the president. I also like how short yet memorable the speech was that Delsin gave. It was a good speech, don't beat yourself over it too much. I can't wait to see how Delsin's and Fetch's relationship evolve in the next chapter. Also, if you wanted to surprise us, have Eugene somehow find himself a date. Wouldn't that be interesting. I know he is nervous and all but I am sure you can create a situation or two to make it happen. Once again, thank you for writing this. I can' wait to see what happens next.
7/4/2014 c1 FragileSpark
I really like how you portrayed Fetch's personality. I definitely see her acting like that. Hope you update soon.
I really like how you portrayed Fetch's personality. I definitely see her acting like that. Hope you update soon.
