for Lab Rats FanFiction: Crystal Clear10/17/2014 c5
9Cartwheellou
Chase and gets and girl, u dont see those words put together. Unless its chase gets hit by a girl, but still.
9CartwheellouChase and gets and girl, u dont see those words put together. Unless its chase gets hit by a girl, but still.
10/17/2014 c5
15AllAmericanSlurp
Good chapter :-) Chystal. Crystase. Hm . . .
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER! LOVE PLOT TWISTS! And adoption processes. . . why didn't you ask me? I know all about it because my best friend was adopted.
15AllAmericanSlurpGood chapter :-) Chystal. Crystase. Hm . . .
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER! LOVE PLOT TWISTS! And adoption processes. . . why didn't you ask me? I know all about it because my best friend was adopted.
10/5/2014 c4
9Cartwheellou
Im still here! I like ur story! I cant wait for the next chapter! And if ur discouraged about the fact that ur storys not getting enough attention, its not because of ur story. Its just because most people dont go looking for a frozen and lab rats crossover, and not many people write them, so theyre not at the top of the list. Ill spread the word, but make sure u write this story cause u like it, not so an abundence of people can read it. Plus, even after u finish it, new people will start to read it. And people are prone to reading longer stories, so if u get around 15k, more people will read it. Im more of a 25k person, but the story is as long as the story needs to be. My point is, the farther u r away from 5k, the better. I say keep up the good work.
9CartwheellouIm still here! I like ur story! I cant wait for the next chapter! And if ur discouraged about the fact that ur storys not getting enough attention, its not because of ur story. Its just because most people dont go looking for a frozen and lab rats crossover, and not many people write them, so theyre not at the top of the list. Ill spread the word, but make sure u write this story cause u like it, not so an abundence of people can read it. Plus, even after u finish it, new people will start to read it. And people are prone to reading longer stories, so if u get around 15k, more people will read it. Im more of a 25k person, but the story is as long as the story needs to be. My point is, the farther u r away from 5k, the better. I say keep up the good work.
9/13/2014 c4 Guest
I love this story it might not get attention to much but it should be noticed cause this is awsome I wish I had a account well toodles just kidding I for one don't say toodles well bye can't wait for next chapter
-lovatic2003
I love this story it might not get attention to much but it should be noticed cause this is awsome I wish I had a account well toodles just kidding I for one don't say toodles well bye can't wait for next chapter
-lovatic2003
9/13/2014 c4 Guest
Update faster a GIAGANTIC YES!
only if my parents let me have an account on this site Idon't worry it would fav and follow this story and don't and if I could I probably would fav and follow this story a billon times since that is not possible this is the closest I I can get
-lovatic2003
Update faster a GIAGANTIC YES!
only if my parents let me have an account on this site Idon't worry it would fav and follow this story and don't and if I could I probably would fav and follow this story a billon times since that is not possible this is the closest I I can get
-lovatic2003
8/25/2014 c4
15AllAmericanSlurp
Yay! Excellent chapter and lovely backstory; can't wait for next chapter soon!
15AllAmericanSlurpYay! Excellent chapter and lovely backstory; can't wait for next chapter soon!
8/16/2014 c3 AllAmericanSlurp
Thank you so much for the MASSIVE shout-out and the props! The chapter looks great after your editing... IT LOOKS GREAT! Please update soon, unless you want me to write the next chapter!
Thank you so much for the MASSIVE shout-out and the props! The chapter looks great after your editing... IT LOOKS GREAT! Please update soon, unless you want me to write the next chapter!
7/16/2014 c2 AllAmericanSlurp
This was awesome! However... I got lost several times in that huge paragraph... what will happen? Update soon!
This was awesome! However... I got lost several times in that huge paragraph... what will happen? Update soon!
6/21/2014 c1 Guest
Please update! !
Please update! !
6/17/2014 c1 Mbneinji
When will you add to this story
When will you add to this story
6/16/2014 c1 AllAmericanSlurp
Mm... I doubt that Adam, Bree, and Chase would actually bring a completely new kid down to the lab immediately (it still seems somewhat rushed) but this is definitely a huge improvement from the first version! I loved how you described Crystal at the beginning, and how she revealed her powers!
Mm... I doubt that Adam, Bree, and Chase would actually bring a completely new kid down to the lab immediately (it still seems somewhat rushed) but this is definitely a huge improvement from the first version! I loved how you described Crystal at the beginning, and how she revealed her powers!
