for Run Little Lost Girl8/6/2015 c1 Thorn
Please write more.
Please write more.
6/15/2014 c1 Guest
I bet this would get more favs and reviews I you, you know, actually update!
Come on, man, you promised us darkness and emma having mental breakdowns! You can't just write something good like this and then not update, and leave us in suspense!
It's summer, that means free time and updates, right?
Please update soon!
I bet this would get more favs and reviews I you, you know, actually update!
Come on, man, you promised us darkness and emma having mental breakdowns! You can't just write something good like this and then not update, and leave us in suspense!
It's summer, that means free time and updates, right?
Please update soon!
6/9/2014 c1 Just a Guest
This is totally the best concept I've ever seen for a Once fic!
I had to re read it because it was just done so well. Emma is viewed as this strong character, when she's really quite vulnerable, and she's only human, and can only do so much before she breaks and I think you captured this perfectly!
What I love so much too is that you put us right there inside her head, right in the insanity with us so it feels like we're experiencing it personally as well! It's really really great and very few of the pro writers I've read can/ have pull/ed it successfully.
I really hope you continue this and update soon because as I might have mentioned before, it's too good to be a one shot!
This is totally the best concept I've ever seen for a Once fic!
I had to re read it because it was just done so well. Emma is viewed as this strong character, when she's really quite vulnerable, and she's only human, and can only do so much before she breaks and I think you captured this perfectly!
What I love so much too is that you put us right there inside her head, right in the insanity with us so it feels like we're experiencing it personally as well! It's really really great and very few of the pro writers I've read can/ have pull/ed it successfully.
I really hope you continue this and update soon because as I might have mentioned before, it's too good to be a one shot!
125/26/2014 c1 Just a Guest
Oh, gosh!
I'm scared! And loving it! Agh, what are these feelings?!
Please continue so I can try to deal! And also, it's too good to just be a one shot, so you really need to update and give us input into what/who and all that happened with Emma, and if we should fear that she's lost it.
P.S. I love the POV that you have right now, it is perfect and it feels like we are right there inside Emma's mind, going though everything with her and it's intense in and awesome way! If you do continue, which I really hope you do, keep the POV!
And update soon! :)
Oh, gosh!
I'm scared! And loving it! Agh, what are these feelings?!
Please continue so I can try to deal! And also, it's too good to just be a one shot, so you really need to update and give us input into what/who and all that happened with Emma, and if we should fear that she's lost it.
P.S. I love the POV that you have right now, it is perfect and it feels like we are right there inside Emma's mind, going though everything with her and it's intense in and awesome way! If you do continue, which I really hope you do, keep the POV!
And update soon! :)
