for Keeper Overlord5/18/2014 c1 
3Lone Gundam
Huh, I was expecting Lelouch to grab Euphie, Cornelia, Guenevere, and Marybelle, force them onto a bed and have his way with them.
3Lone GundamHuh, I was expecting Lelouch to grab Euphie, Cornelia, Guenevere, and Marybelle, force them onto a bed and have his way with them.
5/13/2014 c1 Guest
Fix the grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Nice idea though, there were some very creative plots woven into the main story. And on the subject of the harem, DAMN, Lelouch knew how to get it on.
Fix the grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Nice idea though, there were some very creative plots woven into the main story. And on the subject of the harem, DAMN, Lelouch knew how to get it on.
5/13/2014 c1 Kinunatzs The Eternal
Why does it have be always a Goblins? Why not make Gnarl and the Goblins into a Human, Mermaids, Harpies or Lamia's for once like the Naruto x Overlord Crossover i once read that Naru's minions are Human/Kitsune Hybrid
The setting and start is nice but when i read that Lelouch would only control a Goblins i lost interest how would Goblins control and use KMF's?
Anyway it's a nice start but i'm not reading anymore
Why does it have be always a Goblins? Why not make Gnarl and the Goblins into a Human, Mermaids, Harpies or Lamia's for once like the Naruto x Overlord Crossover i once read that Naru's minions are Human/Kitsune Hybrid
The setting and start is nice but when i read that Lelouch would only control a Goblins i lost interest how would Goblins control and use KMF's?
Anyway it's a nice start but i'm not reading anymore
