for Shadow of the Wolf12/26/2014 c2 lalo
I read chapter 1 and 2 and think you're writing the name of the kingdom of lousy Elsa '' Arendell '' is wrong, is written as - ''Arendelle'' with an 'E' and if it's not too much trouble should fix it right away! ...
I read chapter 1 and 2 and think you're writing the name of the kingdom of lousy Elsa '' Arendell '' is wrong, is written as - ''Arendelle'' with an 'E' and if it's not too much trouble should fix it right away! ...
12/27/2014 c23 TheGreenFairy25
I was so excited to see an update for this in my inbox! And you didn't disappoint. I loved this! Definitely do a sequel. I'll be looking forward to it XD
I was so excited to see an update for this in my inbox! And you didn't disappoint. I loved this! Definitely do a sequel. I'll be looking forward to it XD
12/25/2014 c23 RedFoxASW38
That was short, but absolutely adorable, and obviously enough to warm me up in such a chilly day. Long time no see! It's been too long since we last saw you. And as for my opinion, I think a new original story would be better. Their first adventure has been concluded, so I think that so as to start a new challenge for the two, writing a separate story in the same universe would be more fitting. It's only my view, all is up to you. Anyway, merry Christmas to you. I look forward to your new work.
That was short, but absolutely adorable, and obviously enough to warm me up in such a chilly day. Long time no see! It's been too long since we last saw you. And as for my opinion, I think a new original story would be better. Their first adventure has been concluded, so I think that so as to start a new challenge for the two, writing a separate story in the same universe would be more fitting. It's only my view, all is up to you. Anyway, merry Christmas to you. I look forward to your new work.
8/30/2014 c22 TheGreenFairy25
And so it ends. It was a brilliant ending, worthy of your story. Thank you so much for the mention, I'm glad that my reviews helped you and encouraged you, that's my aim with them as much as possible. But with this story it was easy to say positive things because it really is something very special. I have loved every minute of reading it! And I can't wait to see what you do next.
And so it ends. It was a brilliant ending, worthy of your story. Thank you so much for the mention, I'm glad that my reviews helped you and encouraged you, that's my aim with them as much as possible. But with this story it was easy to say positive things because it really is something very special. I have loved every minute of reading it! And I can't wait to see what you do next.
8/27/2014 c21 cheshirecat9116
That was amazing... AMAZING... I READ EVERYTHING IN A DAY AND IT WAS AMAZING :) The stakes... the tension...the fighting... The romance... Damn... I can't even type properly anymore... AMAZING.
That was amazing... AMAZING... I READ EVERYTHING IN A DAY AND IT WAS AMAZING :) The stakes... the tension...the fighting... The romance... Damn... I can't even type properly anymore... AMAZING.
8/18/2014 c20 yazzyfrozenlover
Wow your story is AMAAZING! The people who don't read this are seriously missing out, they have not lived.(no offence) you have inspired me to write my own frozen fanfic so thank you a million times! :)
Wow your story is AMAAZING! The people who don't read this are seriously missing out, they have not lived.(no offence) you have inspired me to write my own frozen fanfic so thank you a million times! :)
8/16/2014 c20 TheGreenFairy25
Oh the cuteness, with Olaf and Kristoff, it's almost too much; I love it! This story is amazing, I really mean that and I'll be sorry when it's finished ( it's definitely one I will read again). This chapter was so good, you write emotions so well, not overly sentimental, with plenty of power, it feels raw and real. Well done. I can't wait to see what happens with Raiden and Elsa. Until next time!
Oh the cuteness, with Olaf and Kristoff, it's almost too much; I love it! This story is amazing, I really mean that and I'll be sorry when it's finished ( it's definitely one I will read again). This chapter was so good, you write emotions so well, not overly sentimental, with plenty of power, it feels raw and real. Well done. I can't wait to see what happens with Raiden and Elsa. Until next time!
8/16/2014 c20 
2ScarletAvenger
I hope you're happy. Now I have the Secret Tunnel song stuck in head because of you! but seriously, I like the ATLA homage with the lights in the cave,you made it own while not losing the homage.
The fact that nothing can be done at the moment to save Raiden makes me sad.
2ScarletAvengerI hope you're happy. Now I have the Secret Tunnel song stuck in head because of you! but seriously, I like the ATLA homage with the lights in the cave,you made it own while not losing the homage.
The fact that nothing can be done at the moment to save Raiden makes me sad.
8/16/2014 c20 4Morgaine2005
*bites nails* The plot is thickening ... I'm glad Kristoff got to Anna. I just hope they can get to Elsa before it's too late!
4Morgaine2005*bites nails* The plot is thickening ... I'm glad Kristoff got to Anna. I just hope they can get to Elsa before it's too late!
8/11/2014 c19 Guest
One word for this chapter... Wow. I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it but particularly the last paragraph. Kristoff and Olaf were so cute. I am dying to see how this works out!
Ps: I hope the test went well. :-D
One word for this chapter... Wow. I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it but particularly the last paragraph. Kristoff and Olaf were so cute. I am dying to see how this works out!
Ps: I hope the test went well. :-D
8/11/2014 c19 Guest
One word for th
One word for th
8/10/2014 c19 RedFoxASW38
Well, has it not been quite a long time, my friend? I have patiently waited for the next chapter and i must say that it worth the wait. Im impressed with what you've come up with. Im most certainly anxious to see the next chapter. Good work! Until next time, my friend, and hopefully it wont take too long.
Well, has it not been quite a long time, my friend? I have patiently waited for the next chapter and i must say that it worth the wait. Im impressed with what you've come up with. Im most certainly anxious to see the next chapter. Good work! Until next time, my friend, and hopefully it wont take too long.
7/14/2014 c18 MentalMarzipan
Another great chapter and suprize at the end. For Tyr I imagine its voice to be that of lord hircine from skyrim and raiden's to be that of a typical Nord from skyrim. I can't really think about what Korin would sound like though, maybe that of an Orc in skyrim? You can tell I really like skyrim now! XD
Another great chapter and suprize at the end. For Tyr I imagine its voice to be that of lord hircine from skyrim and raiden's to be that of a typical Nord from skyrim. I can't really think about what Korin would sound like though, maybe that of an Orc in skyrim? You can tell I really like skyrim now! XD
